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I really like the exchange between them and how it feels as if there is a bit of ... something more? Like even though the girl is focused, the guy is focused on another matter entirely, so then it almost feels as if the girl is oblivious. o.O
Hell, to the guy, is without the girl... It's quite a roundabout way, but I do like how you have portrayed it all overall.
I feel as if this says so much. That's how I interpreted it, anyway.