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Ex Boyfriend, Ex Girlfriend

I still love her smile; I still smile for him
Why did I let her go?; Why did I walk away?
She needed her space; I thought I needed space
She needs her freedom; I need him back
I need her; He needs time
She's happy; I'm shattered
I'm broken; He's okay
I'm still waiting; He'd moved on
She's moving on; I can't let him go
I still love her; I'd lost him forever.
A short poem about the end of a relationship and what came after.

"It's not easy, it never been.

And where things are not what it seems." :grump:

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BloodLoved Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
So true.................
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Me2Smart4U Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
what a very deep and unique flow...I truly enjoyed reading each word...this is very well written :clap

if you have the time or you need something to spark a creative fuse, you should check out my Word Bank contest---[link]
this would be a fun way to get some imagination pumping within your creative brain.
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